00:56.3

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He kissed her lips. Then her ears. Then he continue kissing the neck while lifting very slowly her t-shirt. He slid a hand underneath and started caressing her back. She got goosebumps. He bit het earlobe, whispered something in her ear, and while she giggle, he unhooked her bra with one hand.
“Let me close the blinds”
“No, it’s too hot in here… we’ll suffocate”
“Please, I can’t really concentrate with all the light… I’ll put on the fan, it’ll be ok”
“But I like to see you”
“Come on!… I’m not ready for that, let me go, let me close the blinds”
“Ok…” He said with a bit of disappointment.
“Wait, did you hear that?”
“Hear what?”
“A noise outside”
“Maybe some neighbor, it’s 3.30pm, nobody will show up before 4.30pm. We have a full hour” she said while taking off her t-shirt.
“Are you sure?”
“Trust me, I know all the movements of this house”
“Ok then…” he said, and also rush to take off his t-shirt.
He kept kissing her and very sensuously, pushed her towards the bed. He caressed her shoulder with one hand while unbuttoning her pants with the other. Then slowly unzipping it. She moved a bit, just enough to make it easy for him to take her pants off. He rushed to take his pants off too.
“Now, one more obstacle to go…”
She bit her lip, stared at him and he, without taking his eyes off her, took off her panties. She smiled and felt she was blushing, so she covered her face with both hands.
He laughed and bent over to kiss her belly. He kept kissing her belly and going up slowly to her neck. He was now on top of her.
One second later, the door opened. WTF!
That was my dad entering my bedroom when I was about to have sex with my boyfriend. He had forgotten to take something in the morning for his work and he needed it in that moment. He said he called me a few times from downstairs and while going upstairs. But I guess the noise of the fan and me being so focused in my things (plus the need of the freaking Whisper 900 since then), I couldn’t hear him. When he saw the door closed, he thought I was sleeping, that’s why he didn’t knock, but he wanted to check.
I’m still amazed that he didn’t drop dead right there. I was 17. It was a VERY hot day in December.
It took a couple of weeks until we could look at each other in the eyes again… Or that my boyfriend decided to go back to my house.
One secret out. 33345799482749 to go.

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~ by DotedOn on October 22, 2014.

53 Responses to “00:56.3”

  1. That is totally something that would happen to me, although thankfully it did not……how embarrassing!

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  2. I have no stories like this. Yay me.

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  3. My dear, I can’t wait to hear more. LOL! How long before you and your Dad, cleared the air?

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  4. OMG! I would have died! Very well written and very focused. 🙂

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  5. You were surprised he didn’t drop dead? I’m surprised he didn’t kill both of you, lol! You’ve got the material, now get going on that novel 🙂

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    • Thank you Mandy!! 😀
      The novel is written!! I can’t wait to publish it… It’s in correction stages, I hate it’s taking so long, but I don’t dare to publish it full of mistakes 🙂

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      • I had no idea you had written a novel already. Now I’m really excited for you!! How long until you reach the publishing phase? Can I pre-order? -D

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      • 🙂 Since I didn’t have any money to pay someone to correct the mistakes (I tend to mix up the order of the words :D), I gave it to the English teacher of the previous school (who’s also a friend) to correct it… She took days to start reading it… Then every time she saw me, she blushed and fan herself with a paper or whatever she had at hand… That was in January… I still didn’t get it back. I’m seriously considering asking someone else. I created this blog over two years ago and posted the chapters as soon as I wrote them. I finished the book in Dec 2012. It was like I also died at the time. A friend inspired me in February this year, to start writing again, so I started a project (to change my life and leave everything I hated behind). I was amazed to see that I could really get whatever I wanted :).
        I LOVE writing!! I have ideas for the second part (that I started to write but I left it until the first part is published, just in case I decide to change it).
        I posted a few chapters here… In February there is one post called Answer… And a few more somewhere else.
        Should I warn you about the content?? 😀

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      • When I get some time I’m going to search for your chapters. Of course, you’re entire blog is material! You do a wonderful job on your writing, Paola. Check in with that teacher–it’s been gone too long. She may have gotten busy and it got buried somewhere! No warning about content. My life has been made up of content, lol! ❤

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      • Hi Mandy!
        I’m so glad about the content in your life… Can I encourage you to share? 😀
        I wrote an email to the teacher, she never replied. I hope she didn’t publish it and is getting my $$ 😀
        You’ll find only one chapter posted and the other 2 are pictures I took from the computer screen 🙂 (lazy to the point that hurts!!)
        Have a shiny day!!

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  6. My Almost Porn Twin P
    I thought you were sharing one of your exotic stories, I don’t which is worse. I can’t believe your dad didn’t ground you until you got married.
    Off to take a nap. Hopefully we’ll hook up at waking hours soon.
    Not Porn Twin M

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    • Hola Not Porn Twin M,
      Would you like one of my erotic stories??? 😀
      I was a few weeks away of being 18 and when he asked: “Was it the first time?” and I answered “No” he knew his battle was lost… And I’m glad he didn’t ground me because I never married!!
      Sleep well,
      Your Almost Porn Twin P 🙂

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      • Porn Writing Twin P
        I read a couple of your erotic stories and they were making me sweat, if a very good way. It doesn’t seem right to like your twins porn. Write about something a bit less steamy. Remember I’m sick, like you, going without. Don’t make it to rough on me. Seeking up to do Throw Back Thursday. Supposed to be in bed.
        Sickly Twin M

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      • hahahahahahahahaha 🙂
        Twin, thanks for telling my male followers that I’m going without 😀 (when I read that this morning, I had tears in my eyes). Did you think that was steamy?? That was my 14 years old self writing it… If you read what I can write now, you’ll be surprised! 😀
        I hope you are sleeping now 🙂

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      • No,that post was not steaming, I’ve read some of your Fucccking post. Those are steamy. I know where your mind stays!!!!! I don’t think I told anything your males readers didn’t already know. Of course they don’t know what it’s going to take to get to the goods, I do. 🙂
        Laughing Twin M

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      • From bad…. to WORSE!!! 😀
        Now not only my male readers know that I’m not getting any, you are telling them about the goods as if you had been there!!!! 😀
        DON’T HELP ME!! hahahahahahahahah 🙂

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      • I know nothing about your goods personally, just making a broad statements!!!!!!!! You could use my help when I come to visit, I know how to sweetly flirt with the most desirable, loving, good hearted men. If not all of the above, I can still see and pick out the superficial best pick in the crowd. 🙂
        I’m just here to help. As a twin you might not always see the value of my help. I’ll have to come to Germany to remind you why we are twins who think very much alike!? HAHAHA 🙂
        Pissing my pants Twin M

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      • Please Twin, come and show me!!!
        These men here are a bit different from what I’m used to… And that reminded me of the picking line my German friend taught me…. I MUST write about it!!! 🙂

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      • Sounds like a great post to me. Then put it to use and let us know if it works!!!!! 🙂

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      • Wait to hear about it!! 😀 😀

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  7. Well on the bright side, your father respected you enough not to go completely bonkers, scream and yell, and chase your boyfriend around with some heavy object. When my daughter got pregnant, she was very fearful of my reaction. I knew how brave she had to be to come to me and trust me enough to tell me so I looked at her very confused and asked her if she knew what caused it. We smiled, and I thanked her for the gift of a grand child and told her not to worry. It made a very big difference.

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  8. That’s why I NEVER brought my dates home :). I just realized that I haven’t been subscribed to your posts via email, and I hardly ever check the reader. I am very interested in your blog though. I just have some catching up to do :).

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